very cool poem. HAs a lot of feelings that evrybody deals with evryday. keep up the good work. Also please read and review to some of my stories and poems. thxs

wow... nothing more need be said... wow

Ok, bad Amber. The battle may be lost, but the war isn't over.

::huggles:: I'll lend you one of Mom's katana's to help fight with. ::grin::

I like this poem way more than the other...probably just me, though.

wow, dats really powerful!

Another good piece of writing! You are quite a good writer! Keep it up!Anna.

Very deep, enjoyed it lots.

Very creative! I like how you split the poem...made me wanna read more! It's soo simple but the words...wow...words mean a alot here than 100 or so words in my poems (lol) Awesome work!

PS: Wud it be too much to ask if u check me poems sometime? Lots of new stuff lately. Please. Thankies -bows-

I like. Good imagery there.

Would be more pleasingto the eye if you capitalised the start of each line though.

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