i like it. almost reaching out to somebody physically through wordsi like the rhetorics

very powerful adn sad

sad. luvved the poem.

SP

i liked it. the lines "where are you" don't seem to fit with the question "will you be back soon?"...how are you talking to someone if they're not there? to me, your one last anything should be said to the person. unless this has just completely flown over my head and i'm interpreting it wrong...it would sound more logical if you changed it to "where are you going?". but don't change it for me if this is how you like it:D it's still really good. liked it a lot. keep it up!