Again you could write some damn good songs. And again... I love it. Is it strange to you that almost every single one of your poems are on my favorite list?

Great job, this is really good!

Freaking awesome, except mortality and fatality are very close in definition and you have them at odds with each other. I don't know, maybe you did that on purpose. Anyway, very cool.

powerful & true

That was amazing!! The whole poem flowed so well and the message to it was clear and was told well! ^-^ Brillant, dark and beautiful!! Keep up the good work!! >3<

!~* Noelle *~!

This is really good, it's amazing how you grasped the concept of the sick world we live in today >_< Well, I like it, and if someone tells you otherwise tell them to talk to me.

sadly that's true. arghh! makes my blood boil! anyways good poem. a rather sad message but still very good! never stop writing! @_@