Reviews for Chasing the Sunset

Reviews For: Chasing the Sunset

Nightsky Watcher 2005-04-05 ch 1,	Well.. this one is very nice. I like the musicality (yeah I'm somewhat of a songwriter I guess) You could easily turn this one into a song and the end is just so good "There must be some dawn that's left to rend" Superb!
Jani Rieme 2005-03-26 ch 1,	'Rent'? I think you meant 'rend'. But other than that small typo, it was good. The rent just threw me way off there, but I figured it out. The poem was good, really deep; jeez, what I wouldn't give to be half the poet you are!
fallenangel7809 2005-03-23 ch 1,	I loved the Imajary :-)
darkgemini4656 2005-03-21 ch 1,	hm..chasing the sunset...interesting concept...sort of like a rival to The Door's "Waiting for the Sun"...but anyways...i can understand why this isnt all that great...we were all once inexperienced writers with a strong will and a weak concept of what poetry really is...anyone who says they are a natural poet is right out lying...so anyways...good concept...maybe you could recycle this poem into a much better one in the near future...id like to see what you could do with it...cyanide
avani.neglect 2005-03-21 ch 1,	I like some of the ideas you present in this but I have no idea why you're trying to make it rhyme. It doesn't work. I find that I give several reviews like these, and this is why: Very few people can rhyme in meter, and do it well. I gave up metered rhyming a long time ago. Just say what you want to say, and don't change words around just to make it rhyme.
Zefskiy 2005-03-21 ch 1,	Oh. I like this poem. The rhyming is nice. I clicked on it because I used to have a story called Chasing the Spirit Sunset. It was bad, that's wy I haven't posted it on here. Oh, well I really like your poem. ^^ ~Kithra
catching-falling-stars 2005-03-21 ch 1,	i like it! it's really cool. nice rhyming and it just has a nice way to it. good job! never stop writing! @_@
heffiji 2005-03-21 ch 1,	Chasing the sunset is an interesting concept...like trying to catch a shadow. Futile, but you just have to keep trying for whatever reason. Very neat.

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