Interesting relationship there. The tone is rather morbid. I like the subtle fantasy. I had to reread part to get it. :)

uh, you reviewed my stuff a while ago...your mean to my best friend , hanna. FUCK OFF!And BTW, i give you an F for effort!

A decently written story, though the the underlaying ninja theme was a bit embellished.

That's very funny, Macca Lane.

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At times, I was confused, but at the end I loved it. really. you have such a knack for description. if you write a book I'll read it.