|Reviews for White Shadows|
| Seemingly Pointless 3/26/09 . chapter 15
wow, this is really good! :)
| Whackdaddy 3/9/06 . chapter 1
Damn. All I can say is this is pretty powerful stuff. A good message about race in this story so far. And the cruel things that the people do to this handsome young man just because he's diffrent is beyond...degrateing. I can't explain. But none the less, good work. I shall read another chapter tommorrow, and yet another review will be written. Kudos!
| Witchmaster 1/21/06 . chapter 15
Yay for Ash! Radell is a good person, much better than Gharan (whom I really don't like).
Favorite line in this chapter:
"“How would you like to be a squire, lad?” said Radell with a wink. “Simple answer.” He chuckled."
Ash seems very young for a fifteen-year-old sometimes. I don't know why, but he just seems naïve sometimes.
| Celeste Se'oir 1/20/06 . chapter 15
Yay! That was awesome, I knew you'd weasel in some way for him to become a squire or something of the sorts, but that was a great way of doing it! Alai better be thankful to him. Keep it up!
| JBQ 1/20/06 . chapter 15
Finally, something good happened to Ashtaway. I was begining to think you were just gonna keep him miserable. Please update again soon!
| Throggeh 1/20/06 . chapter 15
YAHO! -glomphs San- He. I had to reread half of it because I couldn't remember what had happened, it had been so long. -prods- Now, another chappur about San-kun. w Or I'll send Kiela to eat you.
| M.U.O 1/20/06 . chapter 15
You really love angst, don't you. I still hate the characters, but it's well written.
| Bookworm12-8-90 1/20/06 . chapter 15
Yay! Ashie's a squire! But for how long...?
| Daaaaaaaammmmnnnn 11/20/05 . chapter 14
Huh. That pretty much sums it up. There is no other way to say it: this story is downright orgious. My only critique: it is not on sale in a store so that people could BUY IT and give you money. I wish I had a tatoo of a plastic surgeon performing surgery on a beaver. (write this down, I think it could be a book I guess.) Peace kellie. PEACE IS WHAT THE WORLD NEEDS BESIDES ROAST BEEF.
| candycane-collage 10/8/05 . chapter 14
AH! Late review! I'm SO sorry. I just haven't been on this site like al summer. School's kept me qite busy as well.
Well, anyways, what an awesome chapter. I love Sanaer's tattoo. It's fancy sounding. This chapter rocks! wh00p! wh00p! UPDATE SOON!
| Arrow's Flight 10/5/05 . chapter 14
Ahh. . . the plot thickens . . .
I like the tie in with the tattoo. I want a tatoo like that! (at least one that would wash off. . . My parents would kill me.) Anyway. . .
Oh my Gosh! I updated Avalon Tre! *freaks out and faints*
| Throgmorten 9/26/05 . chapter 14
Hi San! -pokes-
Ha. Torturing with suprise is fun. Go read the new chapters of HT, by the way. Or Rölin will keel you. Not that she wouldn't be assaulted by a mass of guilt and nausea afterwards...XD
| Violet 9/22/05 . chapter 14
Yay! The first review in about a year (or several months-I have difficulty counting...thinkgs...yeah...).Even though you have told me of this chapter several *cough*hundred*cough* times, it's still really good! It was a surprise that was a birthmark-ish thing. Trele was teh funny. *goes off to review other stories*
| Shigure-ami 9/17/05 . chapter 14
AYAME! YOU'RE BACK! I WANT TO SEE YOUR NEW HOUSE! anyways, i have missed you very much, how is cfa? and i like the new chapters in ws quite a lot. Althought ur gonna start making people mad if you don't EVER let ashy stop screaming in agony... i LOVE the tatoo idea. i would get a tatoo, probaby on my thigh, but it would hurt and then my parents would murder me and it would still be there when i was 85 and ew. Who is trele based off? anyone? just curious... and is the adam thing over yet? Govs is sweet- get somebody to invite you to homecoming so you can see everybody-
| Celeste Se'oir 9/16/05 . chapter 14
coolie. I like the choice of design for the tatoo. Poor kid can't seem to catch much of a brake huh? Though I'm starting to see where the too stories might come together now. Sque! I can't wait.