I like this poem too, it makes me think of someone standing behind a cloak and watching me, which isn't the best thing to imagine late at night on my own, but oh well, its a good poem, not weird at all... and anyway, who says there's anything wrong with weirdness? ;)

Oh whoa, okay! I had to read that over again cuz... poetry is just too deep for me lol. I think I sorta get the interpretation- or my interpretation of this. Very cool wording- you're good at this! I like writing poetry too, but it's been a while since I've done it. I'm only good when I'm pressured for an assignment and it's really last minute :/ lol.

i like how you ended it with the struggle of he/she trying to hold up delusions that are falling apart. every time i read it over i end up with a whole new interpretation. i like it. =P

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This is so strange...but it's good. I love the rhythm to it - it has character. Good job!

Don’t worry, I’m not totally sane either. Anyway, I liked this! It was odd, true, but very cool and mysterious. Nice imagery. Overall, I thought it was pretty cool and I enjoyed it. I loved the title. Good work, keep it up!