I liked it, it was full of emotion, very bitter and sad, though it would have been even better if you'd kept a specific rythm, still, the great thing about poetry is that there are no conventionalities to it, so it doesn't really matter. I liked the use of hyphens, and the words you use are well chosen, keep it up :)

Oh!! :o, I had to reread this one again too lol. Man, my brain is just too slow >_>;. This is really good! Gah, write more poety so it'll inspire me to get off my lazy arse and do some myself lol. Sarcasm is like second-nature to me though :(. *Sei is the one that inflicts pain

i really like how you formatted it. i especially like your use of hyphens to kind of give a feel of side commentary. as for your author's note.. i think the best poems come from spur of the moment ideas at night. maybe.

Not horrible at all!!

i liked this ... i was expecting something about the movie but LUCKILY it had nothing to do with the movie at all, haha. anyway ... keep it up! :)

I think you did a wonderful job Love. It's full of emotions and had a nice flow. I really hope to see more from you soon.

Morbid Maxwell-Love and Lube