 Lyra Pocaterra 2007-08-03 . chapter 1I liked it, it was full of emotion, very bitter and sad, though it would have been even better if you'd kept a specific rythm, still, the great thing about poetry is that there are no conventionalities to it, so it doesn't really matter. I liked the use of hyphens, and the words you use are well chosen, keep it up :) |
 Aki to Tarou 2007-03-23 . chapter 1Oh!! :o, I had to reread this one again too lol. Man, my brain is just too slow >_>;. This is really good! Gah, write more poety so it'll inspire me to get off my lazy arse and do some myself lol. Sarcasm is like second-nature to me though :(. *Sei is the one that inflicts pain |