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Reviews For: Cruel Intentions

Lyra Pocaterra
2007-08-03
ch 1,
abuseI liked it, it was full of emotion, very bitter and sad, though it would have been even better if you'd kept a specific rythm, still, the great thing about poetry is that there are no conventionalities to it, so it doesn't really matter. I liked the use of hyphens, and the words you use are well chosen, keep it up :)
Aki to Tarou
2007-03-23
ch 1,
abuseOh!! :o, I had to reread this one again too lol. Man, my brain is just too slow >_>;. This is really good! Gah, write more poety so it'll inspire me to get off my lazy arse and do some myself lol. Sarcasm is like second-nature to me though :(. *Sei is the one that inflicts pain
obsidianserpentine
2005-08-29
ch 1,
abusei really like how you formatted it. i especially like your use of hyphens to kind of give a feel of side commentary. as for your author's note.. i think the best poems come from spur of the moment ideas at night. maybe.
Allela
2005-07-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseNot horrible at all!!
alycia divine
2005-03-21
ch 1,
abusei liked this ... i was expecting something about the movie but LUCKILY it had nothing to do with the movie at all, haha. anyway ... keep it up! :)
Morbid Maxwell
2005-03-21
ch 1,
abuseI think you did a wonderful job Love. It's full of emotions and had a nice flow. I really hope to see more from you soon.

Morbid Maxwell-Love and Lube
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