I've finally had the chance to read one of your stories, and I must say that I like it. Putting my general preferences aside, it's good as a stand alone chapter/story. Going back to what I like, I'd like to see more of this story in order to have some questions answered:-What are these monsters/shadows?-Where did they come from (more precisely than just 'from dreams')?-What is Salali's relationship with Kele (what can I say, I'm a total sap for character pairings)?

it's...confusing, but in a good way. Other than that, I liked it and you should update asap. If you would like to, could you read my story? Only if you want to though. :) Once again, I liked i. Later could you try and make it so that it's easier to understand who's talking. For example after you put someone talking put Kele said, or Salali said or something, cuz it was somewhat confusing.