this is very good!! =)

I like this. I like how you end it with 'everything's okay'. because, it might seem like everything is okay.. but it's not. you know? yeah. anyways, the poem was good. it flowed really well. i dunno what to say about it really, but that it's really good.

i used to b like this...cutting myself...but i stopped. i dont know how...i just did. one day, i woke up, and it no longer appealed to me.

Very powerful! I loved it! I can sort of relate...

wow. just wow. that was... incredible. definitely one of my favourite poems. i can relate to it so well, and everything you said was so true. how you need to pretend you're perfect, but on the inside you're dying. you've got lots of talent.

This is so good! OH MY GOD! I love it. Seriously.

i can relate so much to this...as soon as the blade touches my skin all emotion is gone. but surely there must be a better way to conquer our demons. anyways, this poem was amazing, i loved the wording and the flow. stay strong. all my love. shadowed mind