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merrymowmow 2006-12-26 ch 1,	abuseI was wondering when you're going to update.
JaveHarron 2006-12-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseExcellent short story! Reminds me of the character HK-47 from the game Knights of the Old Republic. The "love" comment particularly reminded me of it... Love is actually a smoking gun.
Holy Smokes 2006-09-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseAnd you've struck gold yet again! :o
Dust Cloud 2006-08-18 ch 1,	abuseI liked this one too, but I do think that it uses a lot of purple prose. Just a thought. I love your work though. I don't remember if I left reviews on either of your essays, but I must say I thought they were amazing. TST
J.M. May 2006-03-26 ch 1,	abuseLove this story! So funny... and the cynical way you show the parody was excellent. Hope you write more parodies in the future ;)
iknowthethirdthingaboutpoet... 2006-03-15 ch 1,	abuseI'm sure you'd love me for abusing your review board and using this to chit-chat instead of actually of reviewing your story, but your love towards me notwithstanding, I'd like to ask you to review the only fantasy story I've ever attempted to write (scroll down to #26 on my page). I've sort of abandoned it, but I'm thinking of continuing it--eventually. I kind of have a vague idea of what I did wrong, but your suggestions and miscellaneous thoughts will definitely be appreciated. Just as a warning, though, the prologue makes no sense until chapter 17--which has yet to be written--and I'm pretty sure it's confusing. Nitpick away; I'm sure you have all the time in the world. :p ... You know, I actually felt guilty about not reviewing this story like I was supposed to, so I decided to just read it for the hell of it. Anyway, I doubt I got half of the jokes cause I don't really read sci-fi and I loathe futuristic stories with robots and other strange machine thingies in them, but wow, your sentences actually flow well for a sci-fi story. Good job!
Sally-andersonn 2005-10-13 ch 1,	abuseThe thing about the first law of robotics reminded me of 'I, Robot'. Otherwise, you decribed the setting really well.
Demi Incarnate 2005-08-19 ch 1,	abuseLove it! The cynicality, the criticism of traditional sci-fi, the insane but logical android and her answers to the questions, and the anticlimactic ending are all wonderful. Write more pardy NOW! Or I eat you.
Sweet Machina 2005-07-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseYour story is the bomb, but I kinda hate it, and it sucks. Youre kind of flippant with your subject matter; is this some kind of parodyish thing you got going on? Well, u should delete it or make it better. I'm sending it to GAFF Original Fiction section, but don't go there and read it, you **. -Lots of love, The Fanfic Goddess
SwordoftheKing 2005-06-28 ch 1,	abuseKye-he-he... excellent. I must say that I truly love it- although I also mourn because of how frequently I see other writers making up similar things and considering them absolutely serious. (I also truly hope that I am not one of them :gulp:) Truly entertaining, an over all good read. Bye!
amour propre 2005-05-08 ch 1,	abuseu r so kewlz!ur storie is so good!11
andsoforth 2005-05-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseI very, very rarely laugh out loud when reading things at the computer; it produces too much in the way of "what are you laughing at?", and then people take offence if you just want to carry on reading... So really it's fortunate that there's no one around, because this made me laugh quite a bit, and if there were anyone around they's probably have done the annoying question-asking thing. But anyway. Despite the fact that I've managed to talk rather more about myself than the actual story, I did like it rather a lot, so, well, go you! :)
Gai 2005-04-15 ch 1,	abuseI thought this story was really funny, I loved the dialogue between the doctor and robot, and the ending was clever.
Azzandra 2005-04-01 ch 1,	abuseMuahahahahaha. Loved it. So what if it's silly? T'was fun.
anime-chicka 2005-03-29 ch 1,	abuseokay okay this story had me smiling and yes I even laughed how silly! XDD!! It was good! great job Oh! and if you have the time please read & review mine ^^ bai's

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