 Siren Xenophon 2005-03-31 . chapter 4Poor kid. . .I like the group, they are different, but kinda the same. . .don't mind me, just update soon. . .if the evil people allow it. . .::glares:: |
 Siren Xenophon 2005-03-31 . chapter 3Hiro. . .hahah. . .what a bad boy. Talk about capital punishment. . ."You're late, so I am gonna chop your ::ahem:: off!" . . .scary lol |
 Siren Xenophon 2005-03-31 . chapter 2I think I like Sen. . .he kinda reminds me of Mitsuhide from Samurai warriors. . .::drool:: he's hot! |
 Z. Shuang 2005-03-25 . chapter 4Wha? Are you serious? That kid stole some food and kissed a girl so he’s bounty? =.= well isn’t that just the stupidest thing EVER. Nice though. ^^ you sure update fast! XD this is a pretty good fic actually. Heh. Please keep it up. ^^ |
 Niiro-san 2005-03-24 . chapter 1 Hmm…for just random thoughts, that’s pretty good. Umm, something constructive would be that it’s a bit hard to follow the characters. Who’s who. And also, the scene change was a bit too subtle. Other than that, it’s good. ^^ real good. XD looking forward to reading more. Though, I really need to brush up my terms. (blows dust off book) yeah…(coughs) well, see ya laterz! Wait! Almost forgot, I rally like your names. Good choices. ^^ they seem to carry some thought. XD |
 Z. Shuang 2005-03-24 . chapter 3(sighs) once again, confusing ending. I’m starting to think that it’s rally just me. =.= hmm…that totally cracked me up how Hiro’s dad totally attacked him like that. ^^ Though, it kinda would suck since it’s “to the death”. Hey, at least he won.^^ Lol Hiro was funny there. Good fight scene. How do you know so many names for everything eh? ^^ it only makes it better. Now, if you’ll excuse me…(pulls out dictionary) looking forward to reading more of your lovely stories Yin. XD "You don't fight anyone else to the death when they come in the door!" T.T beautiful quoteage. |
 Z. Shuang 2005-03-24 . chapter 2Heh. I like how those two are talking. ^^ sounds good. XD and ‘nellies’? Lmfao! That’s a real funny sounding word. This is getting to be interesting. I rather like this chapter a bit more than the last one. Good job! XD you and your thoughts must be good friends. ^^ what did I mean by that? =.= well, keep writing please! [See? I’m reviewing EVERY chapter. Heh.] |
 Z. Shuang 2005-03-22 . chapter 1hi there! thank you so much for the review. it's been so long...T.T i can't read all this right now, but i did skim and it sounds REALLY really good. ^^ i promise to read it over VERY carefully later allright? and i hope you don't mind, but i have this TERRIBLE habit where i review EVERY chapter and they're only getting longer...hope that's okay! XD lol thanks again! +Niiro |
 Jet-sama 2005-03-22 . chapter 1It rocks. It really does. You're going on my favorites list. Congratulations. Nice to see no one here sucks anymore :)
Quote: He's a bad guy? So it's okay that I kiced his **? -Mikura, Mezzo |
 Siren Xenophon 2005-03-22 . chapter 1Interesting so far, I would love to see where this goes. Update soon onegai shimasu! |