Haha that happens to me a lot. After I eat, when I'm really full, I just get super hyper!

Great work.

Sounds kinda like my little brother.

EXACTLY!Kudos,Michelle

this was good intill the last 3 lines...Over all good work a little childish but still good (and i know what you're talking about by being hyper after going out somewhere..i just never thought to write a poem about it) Love EBC

hmm... i've had this happen to me once or twice! its a strange thing... awesome poem, its funny. :-D i read ur profile and i like soundtracks and the lord of the rings to. that was kinda random but yeah. great poem, keep writing!

Hahaha! Aww. Gosh girl you got some energy. You are one hyper kid! I get that way sometimes. But its always late at night (it takes me all day to wake up). Keep up the good work!

this poem seems to have this humerous part to it. The rhymings are good and th epoem made me laugh.

Aw...cute poem! Usually when I eat, I'm "lazy as a louse"...not the other way around (lol). Thank you for sharing! It was sweet to read )

so true

Hehe, cute poem! I love it! _Anna

Ha ha, this is cool! The rhyme reflects the hyperness, i really like it! Well done. And thanks for your review.x

he he, made me smile, the rhyme scheme works well, and the anthropomophication (can't spell) is fun.