Reviews for United Segregation

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Curb Crasher 2008-07-23 ch 5,	abuseThis is so freaking amazing! Thanks for writing! . . . Are you okay? Did anything happen in the past three years?
S 2006-07-20 ch 5, anon.	abuseYou're an extremely good writer. Great story.
Osunale 2006-06-13 ch 5,	abuseThis went from a story looking forward to a jolly vacation and lots of fun sex to surprising intenseness. Realistically angsty, without heavy overburdening. An excellent story. I don't suppose that it will ever be updated?
dyers-eve 2006-04-08 ch 5,	abusePoor Aaron...was it the guy in the toilet who raped him? Please update soon. x
Esquirella 2005-07-13 ch 5,	abuseI just read this again. The drama you wrote here is very moving. You can't help but feel for Aaron.
Pure 2005-07-07 ch 5,	abuseI love this story because it’s so realistically dark and serious. I really feel for Aaron. Cheers!
ddz008 2005-07-03 ch 5,	abuseGreat chapter!This story is really interesting, I love your writing and I want to know what are you planning to do in later chapters.Nineteen kilos is a lot :S I hope he gets help quickly!Hope to see the next chapter pretty soon!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
princess max 2005-07-03 ch 5,	abuseThis story makes me want to grab everyone who's written a crappy rape story and shout THIS IS HOW YOU ** DO IT. 'He didn’t want to tell Jonathan that he was gay and it had always been his fantasy to have his bed partner tie him up' - I give you one thousand million bonus points for this.
shuukaku 2005-05-26 ch 4,	abuseaww... this is good!! keep going! i'm dying to read more! quick!
A Boy Flower 2005-05-25 ch 4,	abuseI think I missed something, but I'm far too lazy to go back and read over it. The dude in the bathroom isn't the dude who raped him, correct? I liked the bathroom dude. NO! I've changed my mind! The bathroom dude is another victim. And we will soon find out the rapist is Aaron's father! ...Yes, I've been drinking too much Pepsi...
A Boy Flower 2005-05-25 ch 3,	abuseSo, I figured, since I'm finally logged in again, and you're on your lunch break, I'd catch up with my reviewing you, since I'm really far behind... So, as weird as it is for me to say this - I liked this chapter. For what happened. Because I really wasn't expecting it and I thought it was great. I was like "..." after reading it, for a good twenty seconds, let me tell you... Alright, onto the next chapter!
ddz008 2005-05-08 ch 4,	abuseGreat chapter!Poor Aaron, must be horrible to be raped... T_TI liked Jon, he seems to be a nice detective.Hope things get better for him.Keep writing, please!!Hope to see the next chapter pretty soon!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Trinket 2005-05-05 ch 4, anon.	abuseOh I like it, you keep it very life-like and the characters are believable and, at least in Aaron's case, likeable. The storytelling is smooth and you can actually use a spellchecker! (jk..I'm a bit sick of those kids and their (mis)spelling) Looking forward to more! -Trinket
Coconutofdoom 2005-05-05 ch 4,	abuseThis story is good so far. Your a talented writter. However in some parts of the story it is a little confusing(it may be me..I'm sick ^_^)its mostly the dreams that are a little confusing. But once again it my be me...update soonMichelle
princess_max 2005-05-03 ch 4, anon.	abuseThat's one damn good cop. You're doing an excellent job with this story; I didn't think you'd be able to write anything considerably better than Inevitably, because quite frankly, there are parts to Inevitably that I still remember because they were so 'true to life'. The bonfire in particular, with the toilet paper ripped off from the public loo; that really sticks in my mind. I actually much prefer this, though. It's awkward and yuck to read through because it's so easy to see what Aaron's thinking and feeling, which makes it terrible but kind of addictive. I had to go back and re-read this several times because of the 'ugh-I-don't-want-to-think-too-hard-about-tis' factor.

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