Its just one of the few things in this world you'd be glad to read aloud. I'm really impressed by the fluidity of the unorthodox words you use in a poem, such as...emo, metaphor.

You are quite possibly one of the most underated and unheard of poets here.

Is it refering to Jack and Jill?

The underlying meaning was pretty easy to understand because you write so beautifully.

What, you mean Jack and Jill? That's the main thing I got. Anyways, it is -beautifully- done. I absolutely love the third stanza, especially how you emphasize "-that hill-", but at the same time leave it open so that the reader can associate it with whatever was more personal in their own relationships. The flow is very good, too. The only thing I would say was that although I love the Jack and Jill scene, the end was a little predictable. However, I like the idea of the girl being the pusher, because that sets it apart. Anyways... great work!

Wow. I love your ending... it just hints at something more...

wow. i aboslutely love this, dear. i cannot think of what to say about it. i just... at a loss of words i suppose. the ending though, i like it A LOT. amazing.

so very great. really enjoyable. i would love to read it over and over.

great ending

i like the format of this, very original! great job!