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| Th-forgotten 2005-05-21 ch 1,  | abuseThis poem has so mcuh truth in it, it has so much meaning. I love it. Not much ryhming, but I like that in this one. Well done. Dorien |
| Thunder Goddes Kino 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseYou know, I'm beginning to envy you for the good meanings you deliver in your poem, along with your awesome style. (Don't I sound stalkerish ^^; I'm really not!) Anyway, like I've said, I like how you talk about how each day ends with the promise of tomorrow and all the things you mention. I don't know why, but siimple ordinary-but-not-so-much-used things like a surprise birthday gift or missing a test sound good in a poem. |
| Thyrt 2005-03-22 ch 1, | abusecooleo! that was neat:Dgood job, keep it up..well you obviously seem to since i've said to so much lol..i love your poems! |