This is a really great piece. I can really relate to where your coming from with this. Wow. QueenVixta

I love the way this poem was written with all of the metaphors, especially the one about the door in the third stanza. ::Hugs:: Keep up the good work-all of your poems are incredibly powerful.

This was really good! Thanks for the review as well.

Oh my gosh Hawke! This gave me tears in my eyes. I think you're such an amazing and beautiful person, and if you ever need a friend, I'll be right here. You can always e-mail me ok? _

The poem is really good, if I could, I would fav all your poems but then my favourite-stories-list would get so full so soon. So conside all your poems faved by me _

Much love, Rosanna.