I get it! Nice job. An effective mood.

Oh, wow...it isn't odd, it's...okay, I want to say creepy, but that's not exactly what I mean. You're reading it, and it's like a chill just goes through you, because you realize what he (the person who's point of view you took) is talking about, and it's like...you're gripped by ice. Sorry, I stink at explaining things. It was awesome, you're gonna be famous some day! Can I have your autograph!?!?!?

Personally, I love the winter: everything so crisp, sharp- and always being washed away, blown away.Also being warm when it's cold is so much nicer than being warm when it's hot. I always look forward to winter. Anyhoo, far more than enough about me! This is a chillingly (arf arf) forward piece, carrying alot but telling little. Well done!

Stones decay, words lastNick

nice description of the winter's wind...i too miss the slashing ice of january's bitter winds...now that i live in texas...but someday i'll find myself up north again and i'll be able to enjoy the winter...good job...i liked the "oft" reminded me of shakespeare...lol...cyanide

the grass is always greener on the other side, ne? very good job on the flow, descriptions, and feeling, this is going on my favs! you've made me think by reading this poem (*gasp*) =D great job ^-^

~Sumi-chan; what you call love, i call pain.

I think I have an idea of what this might be about, but if I'm right, I have no idea why. The way you described the cold gave me chills. :) Keep up the good work.

Is it about someone wanting what they cannot have?

This was good. Nice job on it.