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| twistedklepto123 2005-08-09 ch 1,   | hey karla! this is britt! haven't got a chance to read the story yet, but i promise i'll get on it soon! |
| Infinite Abyss 2005-06-19 ch 4, | This is pretty good. Add the next chapter soon. |
| wintercoldness 2005-05-13 ch 4, | that had an interesting plot! hurry and update thought ^.^ |
| Angelbmo 2005-05-09 ch 4, | nice. i like the beginning. lol that confused me at first in the beginning of this chapter when it started out in Nathan's POV haha i was like ..i thought her father and mother were dead... lol warn me next time! well its a good start id like to see where this is going. oh and thanks for reviewing my story and for the advice ^^ i think that i'm going to take it and maybe rewrite it..update soon ^^ |
| queen-lala 2005-04-29 ch 4, | liked this one. was this his point of view? |
| BedazzledH20 2005-04-28 ch 4, | Aww, Karla, how sweet. Why in the world did you put this under the categories Action/Adventure/Drama when you know dern well this should be under Romance/Humor/Drama. LOL, it's about time you updated, too. It's good, but too short. Update again already!*Pinkie* |
| BedazzledH20 2005-04-14 ch 3, | Aww, Karla. You are so sweet! I like the way you began the story! Then the way they met (so different than in the many books I have read). I can't wait to see what happens next, and I thank you for hooking me up with a review. I'll have to give you a shout out next time I update. Oh, and I'll start a poll about the title, since "Ordinary Day" is much less original than I thought it would be. You are a smiley face lover, and I've found a new story (that I am absolutely in love with!) See you tomorrow. Thanks for having my back! I've got to stop fighting with you now! Wow this is longer than I thought it'd be. Love you!*Necah* |
| jadedmuse 2005-04-04 ch 1, | oh. I like this. Good way to start it! |
| Clavel 2005-03-23 ch 1, | I like it!Nice way to begining it, I can't wait to see who Rachel is :)Clavie |
| jammi 2005-03-23 ch 3, | oh, this seems good so far, I would love to see where you're going with this, and I like how you managed to stay in the time period, it's really good, I like it :D |
| queen-lala 2005-03-23 ch 3, | cool...can't wait for the next one!!^_^ |
| TheAngelofhope 2005-03-22 ch 1, | This was rather good. Great job on it so far. |