Truly magnificent my friend! Your poetic skills far outweigh mine! Excellent job!

good... no, it wasn't good, it was better than good, but i cant put it in words.

Waah! I'll hug you *hugs*

But wow...yeah this poem is amazing...the only problem I could find was that the rhyming was a bit off, but the rest of the poem covers for that...it's filled with such sorrow and passion, you did a wonderful job. You filled it with much emotion. Fantastic!

Always, saeo