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| TaeLynn 2006-08-30 ch 1, anon. | abusedon't kill me, I'm nice! |
| L.M.A. 2005-08-31 ch 15, anon. | abuseI don't know why I'm reviewing all these, you just asked me to read them. You're great, alright? |
| strawberryblitz 2005-07-12 ch 15,  | abuseI like this alot! Good work... its hard for me to believe that you would just leave your family on christmas though... but its good! ... KEEP IT UP~Berry |
| strawberryblitz 2005-06-02 ch 14, | abuseO WOW THIS IS REALLY GOOD... WRITE MORE |
| A Falcon 2005-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell... you should probably NOT use real names you know.. first of all thats just plain bad writing and second of all how do you think it makes those people feel. Dane is not that mean in real life. Just make up names its much more creative and then it isn't as annoying either |
| strawberryblitz 2005-06-01 ch 10, | abuseThis is ending up really well... i will read more later.. PEACE OUT |
| strawberryblitz 2005-05-31 ch 1, | abuseokay so the beginning of this chapter was really good but it seems like she jumps into suicide to fast... and who calls people butt-head these days? |
| you-can-find-me-writing 2005-05-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good, but I have to say I like the counterpart a little better. They wrote it in more detail. I just like how they describe everything. Sorry, I mean, I like your part, but it talks to much about all her troubles. There's nothing happy. And she only slaps a guy like 3 times? Who actually gets slapped that much? No offense. |
| lost-in-silence 2005-04-24 ch 4, | abuseWow! I'm really liking your story. The characters are really well developed and easy to connect to. I can't wait to read more! Keep up the great work! |
| Mlkjug 2005-04-20 ch 13, | abusecoolio |
| Loner 2005-04-20 ch 13, anon. | abuseCoolio. You need to take a break though. Work on your other one...I want to know what's going on with you so...work on it, and not on this one. |
| Bookgirl2021 2005-04-15 ch 12, | abuseNo. You need to speed up and come over! :) |
| Mlkjug 2005-04-15 ch 12, | abuseCoolio, but SLOW DOWN, or your going to have to re-write all this! :) Well, g2g! |
| Mlkjug 2005-04-14 ch 11, | abuseHello everybody! CHAPTER THREE OF BETH'S POINT OF VIEW IS NOW OFFICIALLY POSTED! PLEASE READ! by the way- i like this story! |
| Loner 2005-04-12 ch 11, anon. | abuseThis is really good. I don't know which to say I like better...maybe Mlkjug's, since she's not driving me crazy talking about how long it's taking! :) Anyway...hurry and post, slow poke!~Loner |