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Reviews For: Because Of You
Donny 2007-06-06 . chapter 1
Emotional. Well done!
Sukina 2005-08-08 . chapter 1
Going on my favorites. It would some ** awesome lyrics, and I basically love it... yes, I am indeed weird.
Bright Green 2005-06-26 . chapter 1
Pretty, pretty words.

Thanks for the review, by the way.
ATTITUDE01 2005-05-12 . chapter 1
That's very passionate and deep.Keep writing like this. I love the style and wording. It's very good.
HauntedMisery 2005-05-10 . chapter 1
Wow, I loved this, great job!
poet tree 2005-05-03 . chapter 1
This is so painfully good.
DreamScary05 2005-04-04 . chapter 1
I have kind of felt this way before, not in the sake of love though. I've wanted to be held, to be understood. Great Job, I like it. "Purify me. Clean me up." and "Razor Blade kisses..." are my favorite lines from this poem!

Thanks for the review!
simpleplan13 2005-04-01 . chapter 1
i can totally relate & i lveo the ending.. awesome job
Mistress Mai Lynn 2005-03-26 . chapter 1
KYAH! I **' LOVE your stuff! It's so angst, so... *thinks* I dunno, but I just love it! ^.^ Please, write more!!
Mai Lynn (too lazy to sign in) 2005-03-24 . chapter 1
DAMN! I **' love your stuff, dude. Completely just oozes of angst and disgust of oneself. I... I love it...

*snuggles tightly* Write more, write more!!
Angel of the North 2005-03-24 . chapter 1
"Razor Blade kisses" - that line is fantastic.

It's a good poem, but could do with being more directed (i.e. a little shorter or else putting more images into it - things repeat without actually developing?)

Not sure how better to put it, but I really did think it was good. Especially the bits in brackets.

Thanks
cheeseworth 2005-03-24 . chapter 1
raw and real; very emotive.
Kristen 2005-03-23 . chapter 1
I really like this one. It's how I feel sometimes! (I really do) Yeah, anyway keep up the good work, kay? My review for this is that it shows how some who did something that got to them and can realt to many people. Once again, very nice.
poetic abortion 2005-03-23 . chapter 1
This is going on my favorite lists ... WERE IT BELONGS! XD Beautiful poem, dark and saddening all at once. ^-^ Beautiful poem. Well done!!

!~* Noelle *~!
Nothing Profound 2005-03-22 . chapter 1
Absolutely incredible.
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