Awesome twist :) It's sad that this actually does happen to some people :)

Gr8 Story

love it!

A bit preachy, but a good point. I liked how the narrator was the victim's husband.

Good story. Me like.

Wow very insiteful I must say it makes you think about your surroundings in a public place. The sad part is that stuff like this happens all the time and people are to proud to admit that they were at fault. Good jod.

Oh my God, the character development in that was awesome! From an innocent, bored passenger playing a game with himself, to psychopathic stalker/killer, to grief-stricken husband and concerned citizen . . . you bring the reader through different perspectives on the main character, making this a suspenseful and poignant story. The last sentence made me want to cry!

Also, you make an excellent point, and not one I'll soon forget.

Awesome twist, I had no idea. I love your writing style and how you put together great stories without feeling like you have to go overboard with descriptions. As always, nice work, keep writing.

**Slave**

Hey, thought I'd check out some of your work and I was suitably impressed. The story makes a very good point about how much people say on their mobile phones and the possibilities that could stem from that. On top of that, the story itself was well told and intriguing to the end. Well done. I'll read more of your work some other time, when my mum's not nagging at me to get offline.