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| xsaturnine [from ffnet] 2006-04-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseAhh! 'ello Aquila! I'm reviewing like I promised. Sorry it took so long, though. We both know how much I fail at things like that. Eh heh heh. And now, the part where I actually review. For someone who can't write poetry for her life, this piece was very much awe-inspiring. It flowed beautifully. My favorite lines are: "Sticks and stones may break my bones/But words will break my soul." It is wonderfully poignant and the reality of it drives it straight home. The air of hopelessness and ruination reminds me that tradegies happen all too often in this world, and there will always be someone suffering. So. There we go! I will most definitely review your other stuff when I have the time. Also, I friended you on LiveJournal, so you are now obligated to update at least once for me. :grin: |
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-04-30 ch 1,  | abusewow, what a powerful poem, the rhythm works really well, kinda reflects how the pain never leaves, its just always there, so yeah, the rhythm here works really well, i love these lines "These are not visibleAny therefore not coverable"just makes a lot of sense, loveit, weasel within xx |
| Crimson Riley 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abusethis was so intense! great imagry and flow excellently done! |
| painted stars on blue sky e... 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abuseOH WOW. THAT WAS WONDERFUL. I love the imagery. PRETTY. Um.. yes. I liked it. |
| dustytiger 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abusewow! another great one! i, too, appricate all my reviews, so thanx for another one!! |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-03-24 ch 1, | abusethis is so tragic and painful. The whole meaning of it is soo true. People bare too many scars of life and it's painful. This is so very well written. keep writing! |
| Rosanna28 2005-03-23 ch 1, | abuseMan, this is really beautiful. I wish I could stay and read more of your work, but I have to go now. But don't worry, I'll come back later and check it all out! As for this poem real quick...All I can say about it is that I can relate so much..It's just amazing ^_^ Much love, Rosanna. p.s. Thank you Thank you Thank you for all those lovely reviews you gave me! Means a ton to me! ^_^ |
| blackoutroses 2005-03-23 ch 1, | abuseloved the last line- intense emotions. Good work. |