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| Osunale 2005-11-24 ch 2, | abuseGah. Why have I not read this sooner? It is brilliant and lovely. Madrah is incredibly interesting. |
| Cherise 2005-11-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseAw! Innans are so cruel! They made them like that, made them breed to look that way, and now all they do is bannish them and make them feel lower than low. |
| M L 2005-04-18 ch 2, | abuseI really like Madrah and Katarou together. I don't know now that Zabar's hanging around, but .. argh. |
| PirateGrrl 2005-04-12 ch 2, | abuseAww! Why didn't Zabar say anything earlier?! Katarou is mean, but I can understand why he's so apprehensive. Poor Madrah.. all he wants is someone to love :( |
| Wolfwitch 2005-04-12 ch 2, | abuseIt was nice to have an insight on the Vazelki movement, although I would have preffered to have a bit more Katarou/Madrah musings at the end. |
| Esquirella 2005-04-12 ch 2, | abuseA sad chapter for Madrah. If only he'd seen Zabar's love. Will Katarou ever care about him at all? |
| Draia-Rodahi 2005-04-12 ch 2, | abuseaw! I need more fluff! |
| ash211 2005-04-11 ch 2, | abuseThank you so much! I am very glad this story hasn't been given up on. I am in love with all of your others completely and I look forward to what ever comes with this one :) |
| redredredred 2005-04-11 ch 2, | abuseyeah! another chapter! can't wait for the next. This my fav story of yours, with brett & damon in close second. |
| Wolfwitch 2005-04-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is really sweet. Sad, but sweet. I feel so bad for poor Madrah. I know I should feel bad for Katorou too, but somehow he still seems like a bit of an ** to me. |
| The Inkslinger 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abuseI'm so happy to see this story again! I really enjoyed it.. and I still remember, after spotting it on the 'Just In' catagory, then reading it, I wanted to smack myself when I finally looked at the Author name and discovered who had written it. Heh. Silly me, I should have known.. It reminded me of Avanthi (ack, my memory is so shot.. did I spell that right?) in it's originality and style, and I think that's why I loved it so much. In fact I even went hunting for stories that were similar in nature afterwards (I wanted more, you see..) but I couldn't find anything! And I don't just mean on Fp.. I mean I searched all the original fiction sites I could get my hands on.. so I do hope you'll update it. Of course no pressure to do so, I'll be patient, I promise. Oh my, more senseless blathering.. but I'll be back! *glomp* -Inky |
| M L 2005-03-24 ch 1, | abuseSad. That wing powder thing is just cruel. |
| Draia-Rodahi 2005-03-23 ch 1, | abuseDifferent and intriguing is how I would classify this story :) Please write more |
| redredredred 2005-03-23 ch 1, | abuseyeah! you posted this story again! does that mean you are going to update it?!?! pretty please?!?! this is my favourite out of all of them! ^__^ |
| Esquirella 2005-03-23 ch 1, | abuseAh! Finally reposting this one, huh? COOL! I was hoping to see it back. These two just seem so tragic at this point. I hope it gets better for them soon. Especially Madrah. While I do feel bad for Katarou's predicament, it seems like he had an easy life before, whereas Madrah's known nothing but scorn and barely donned tolerance from others, especially Katarou's people. |