 Nemonus 2007-03-20 . chapter 1I like that. It brings new levels of meaning to the levels of meaning (...) which exist in words. The last line is just creepy enough. Good. |
 hoowdoideletethisaccount 2005-12-06 . chapter 1lol...
This is amazing. Seriously. I love the intellectual, insightful quality of your writing. How many people in the world would wonder what words would do "left on their own"? I loved this. |
 catseyeview 2005-08-22 . chapter 1I love the play here, the conspiring letters... |
 furai 2005-05-16 . chapter 1Very nice, it really leaves one to ponder about it. I especially like the last bit:
"(we're not saying)"
Nice work. :) |
 Cinderblock 2005-05-06 . chapter 1That is a thought that has never crossed my mind before while writing. I like it. Very mischievious. (if I spelled that correctly, what does it matter, anyways, I digress). Very amusing content. The free-style flow you have to it is absolutely seemless. A rarity in my readings. Keep up the good work. |
 The Blind Guardian 2005-04-21 . chapter 1I found this poem a bit brief; however it is certainly an interesting idea. |
 Elij 2005-04-04 . chapter 1Love the imaginative philosophy in this poem. Your last stanza and line seal the punch very well.
Thank you for interesting read. |
 youzi 2005-03-29 . chapter 1Loved this piece...really cool and fresh the ideas you raised about what letters would say if left on their own...maybe we ARE being meddlesome when we write !anyway..Great job =P |
 DathomiranSciFiAuthor 2005-03-23 . chapter 1Cool poem, Lowell! Very original. |
 beti213 2005-03-23 . chapter 1hm... I read this over two or three times letting the words and the idea soak in, and I've decided-very cool :) I like how you phrase it; it was a treat just to hear the rhythm of the words in my head as I was reading. good job. |