 Wistera 2005-03-24 . chapter 1 One question: Who?
I wanna be able to rhyme!! ::throws a temper tantrum:: Wah.
Hehe, the Johnny Depp part was rather interesting. ^^ |
 mizu no kokoro 2005-03-23 . chapter 1wow^^ i feel the disgust~~ Very well placed~
keep writing! |
 Jay Bustos a.k.a. Nova 2005-03-23 . chapter 1 lol, nice! |
 SagaciousPnay 2005-03-23 . chapter 1 For some reason this reminds me of my brother. The feelings u display here are very similar to how I feel about my bro. Don't ask. Anyway, great poem. Short and well-written! |
 swift sky silver 2005-03-23 . chapter 1that's so true... and i hate it when they just keep bugging me and bugging me for a reason... just one thing, 'explaination' should be spelt explanation. =0) |
 LauraKM 2005-03-23 . chapter 1Good, raw hatred, wish i could. I like the rhyming, it works well here. Good poem |