Reviews for Ugly Pretty Things

anon
2005-05-17
ch 1, anon.

abuseOuch. If this is based on reality, please don't give up yet. People may be stupid, but when they're your friends you can't just shrug and say "screw it" because they're still your responsibility. Especially if your friend is losing himself and unable to watch out for himself.

Eboniccinderella
2005-04-12
ch 1,

abuse"Regretting youLike a sip of sour vinegarMistaken for sweet sweet ciderCuz outward appearances are deceivingAnd some pretty things are nauseating"

that was a very beautiful,descritpive beginning...but your next few lines sound like a rant in poetry form.Poetry,however,is all about how you feel so don't feel like I'm trying to bash you for it.

"And you can't wise up and learnWithout it screwing your perspective"

That's true to everything in life.In fact,it's obvious.Thanks for saying it.

"Not worth the anger that you triggerCuz I have fishes so much biggerI'm getting off my soap boxAnd I'm moving way beyond"

Soap box and big fish?I understand the bigger fish I think(more fish in the sea concept)but what does the soap box symbolize?

"Cuz you're just a stupid kidAnd you're not even real"

how could there be a stupid kid if they are not even real?So who is this poem about then...

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