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| Joan Marie Mesi 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseI really like the imagery used in this. And the subtlety in the rhyming scheme. Good, effective, and not corny in the slightest. And so so true. Go Well, Joey |
| blackoutroses 2005-03-23 ch 1, | abuselove the title- it acts as a great simile for the thoughts in the poem. |