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| not sure yet 2005-10-05 ch 1,  | abuseaw, wow, that was heartbreaking, really much so and like, i dont know, it's something that isnt very often touched upon, i like that, really nicely done as well, espthe ending, very strong, well done |
| Rebekah the Scribe 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abuseOkay...this was disturbing. Old people shouldn't be treated so badly...they have enough problems anyway...(no meanness meant here). I do believe that maybe you should up the rating though. Just to T. That's all. Nice job though. You created a strong emotion and it was portrayed well! ~CR |