oops sorry, i misread misuzu for miharu.

nice story so far. i wanna try kendo in college. :) i love swords, especially katana. i wanna learn to use them. =P anyway, this is nicely written. i like how it's going so far. miharu seems to be a bit bipolar at times. i like how this is mysterious. in this chapter, is she still 11? isn't that a bit young to be having sexual relations? but anyway, keep writing. i'll read more of this when i have more time. keep up the good work. ^_^thanks for the review. lol don't worry about my grammar. the lack of grammar in most sections of that poem was actually intentional. and i never capitalize i's. that's my style i guess. but in that poem, except for the italicized part, i pretty much refrained from using punctuation and made the language more simplistic i guess you could say. anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

I like this one better than the one I reviewed above, though this is still quite short. I guess it is more subdued than the other one, which is appropriate for its length.

Interesting. Definately reaks of Samurai X (Rurouni Kenshin OVA) but still, I found my own inspiration from that trilogy for the third script in the series that Love Amidst Death comes from. You could probably length the chapters, and there were a few grammatical errors, but otherwise fairly good.

Not bad so far. I'll read more later - I like it though. Hm - I wonder what Miharu did and man that does that girl have a temper.

The only advice I can give is - Try being a bit more descriptive and take your times with sentences. Thats all! Hope you read more Behind Kaiti Yotsu soon.

Oh Kendo! I love all types of sword fighting! Thanks for the review.

Yet again another good chapter. From the same good author. Hey have you ever looked at some of my stories? Well if you didn't you should and if you did you should look at them again.

Hey good short story so far._.

Yay! Looks good so far. Couldn't help reading it when I saw the summary, it siad the word 'katana'... And you know how Kenshin lovers are... XD

Anyway, looks interesting. Waiting for the next chappie, got you on my alert list. TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!

--Cerii-chan!