I like this, me of "Grizabella" from Cats, same idea perhaps. You pulled this off easily, the fluidity is flawless. Nice work.

Check out my -Actress- poem...very similar concept. The repetition does tend to take away from the effect, but I did enjoy the way you spaced out your poem towards the end it really made me stop and consider each phrase.

wow.. powerful adn great repition

I think you over use the whole Prima Donna concept. This could be better.