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| Hopeful Light 2006-06-08 ch 1, | Very powerful poem. I'm impressed. It was very emotional but very truthful at the same time. Good job love. |
| Amber 2005-06-20 ch 1, | this was very emotional and i see the reason behind it. Just remember to target your emotions towards possitive and try not to be so harsh. You are the best and the greatest so I jsut want you to remember I am here even if I am hours away in actuality. |
| Frank Castle 2005-04-15 ch 1, | And that was article three, not article one, as the server would have you believe. |
| Frank Castle 2005-04-15 ch 1, | I don't think he should go to jail. Here's why. PUNISHER'S DECLARATION OF INTENT, ARTICLE I: In certain...extreme situations, the law is inadequate. In order to shame its inadequacy, it is necessary to step outside the law...to pursue...natural justice. This is not vengeance. Revenge is not a valid motive; it's an emotional response. No, not vengeance. Punishment. |
| deeper-meanings21 2005-03-23 ch 1, | that was good! keep writing! you should check out my short story emily and jake...its about abuse...its sad... |