Very powerful poem. I'm impressed. It was very emotional but very truthful at the same time. Good job love.

this was very emotional and i see the reason behind it. Just remember to target your emotions towards possitive and try not to be so harsh. You are the best and the greatest so I jsut want you to remember I am here even if I am hours away in actuality.

And that was article three, not article one, as the server would have you believe.

I don't think he should go to jail. Here's why.

PUNISHER'S DECLARATION OF INTENT, ARTICLE I:

In certain...extreme situations, the law is inadequate. In order to shame its inadequacy, it is necessary to step outside the law...to pursue...natural justice.

This is not vengeance.

Revenge is not a valid motive; it's an emotional response.

No, not vengeance.

Punishment.

that was good! keep writing! you should check out my short story emily and jake...its about abuse...its sad...