this is great. so honest. and it's sucha a great thing: not enough people are honest these days...

Hehe... I like this one. So true!

-ShadowNemesis

This is an awesome poem, god how i can relate to this. You really know how to write poetry so relevant to many people. I loved it.R&R my work and i'll return the favour, _devil-apprentice

aww i really like this one! know the feeling! and thanks so much for reviewing mine ;)

This is very interesting. I love all the symptoms of infatuation you cited. I was going down as I was reading, and my feeling was "Check. . . check. . . check, yup I've been there. . . check. . ."The ending is a clever twist. The whole thing is cleverly written, actually. But mostly I really just like how easy this poem is to relate to.

loved the lines:"It's not a love poemIt's a dream"- sweet, but not cliché, i liked the way you worded this.

I enjoy the rhythem you've threaded through this (whether you meant to or not). This is also an interesting perspective. You'll make a great writer some day, if not sooner. Trenton K. Fox.

three words :

wow.

truly brilliant.

i like this, its very real and nice. really captures what one feels. nice work

Pammy-chan! *hugs/glomps* I am so sorry I haven't reviewed in so long. ;; I've been lazy. :P Pammy-chan, this poem was beautiful. Absolutely amazing and filled with detail! Well done Pammy-chan! *hugs/glomps*

!* Noelle *!

I've felt this way a lot, especially with the girl I wrote mine that you reviewed for :) You're an awesome writer!

I like it _

That's the best way to look at it. If you're good at holding masks... Great way of describing the situation, though... Keep writing!

YaY! i was first to read it as skool AND here! LoLz