This was really pretty... I don't know if that is how you wanted it to come acrossed but I was 'aw' worthy anyway.

I like it, nice writing, my favorite part was the imagery given by this line: "Mischievous ice blue eyes see straight through me"

i love the last lines ot this most, the rhyme is really good in this, nice work, interesting poem, i like it :) x weasel within x

p.s. new poems up now x

Finally, it's posted! Sorry, would have reviewed sooner had it not been for the ever-elusive softball practice and utterly evil-eye watch of parentals! Anywho, This is a god one! I like it lots! I guess I don't got much to say about it, 'cept I like it! See ya!Sleepless in the SubZERO,Tatianna Blusummer

I like ^_^ It reminds me of "The Shadow-Lover" by Mercedes Lackey. Ever heard of it? I love the imagery you used, as I do in everything you've written : ) Reading this has made the sick girl (i.e., me) feel happyhappy...ironic, eh? :P

I love it ash-chan it is great *claps* Keep writing! Bye

... this is incredibly touching. So soft and i love your rhyming it seems so nutral and flows so well.

Wonderful job, i mean it! Truly great!