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Wingless Cherub 2005-12-25 ch 1,	abuseI love how long this is and it's so well-written. Very nicely done. You convey the thoughts and feelings of your character in a calm and precise way--I really like this! I couldn't find anything to critisize (though it's like breathing for me). I hope you'll continue to write poetry (because just reading this poem makes me want to read more. S'pose I could go through some of your fiction too though. :) )
Tangerine Tickle 2005-08-20 ch 1,	abuseAw, that was sweet. :3 ~Tangerine Tickle~
Eris Mackenzie 2005-06-18 ch 1,	abusesnicker Hehehehe, I love how you were like "Okay this is about a guy and his GAY lover." like we couldn't figure it out. Anyway, I liked how you repeatedly used "I smiled once". Very nice rythmn. nods head Oh, and I meant to ask you before in the review for "Freakier than This" if you wanted a beta. I just noticed a few mishaps and wondered if you'd like someone to look at it. (also I want to read it before everyone else! Hehe.. j/k) But anyway, if you're interested, email me and let me know. ^__^
Eitriarch 2005-05-16 ch 1,	abusei just love gay poems...stories, pictures, you name it... that doesnt sound right coming from me...
Morbid Maxwell 2005-04-05 ch 1,	abuseAw...that was sad. I liked it then when I learned it was about a guy and his gay lover, it made it all the more better. You did an excellent job on this. Morbid Maxwell-It's a Beyblade orgy!