I love it! you should deff. continue with it!

Sounds fun.

Oh this is so damn hard, i just can't decide what i want u 2 continue. But now(after pulling my hair out) I decided i like Forgotten Autumn Nights (cos it's just the best)and Forces of Nature (cos it's different from all other stories) But i don't really mind, cos i love all these stories!

DEFINITELY continue. i love it.

~dragonfly

im really enjoying this.. you're opening is .. different!! i like the whole idea of gacmille.. looking human but having powers.. kinda what i wish reality was like! anyways id love for u to update this as it had good material... well done! love and admiration Gretchen45 x plz o plz review my story 'Quartz sight' as itd mean so mucht o me!! tanx x

Looks like a good start. I'd like to know more about the Gacmi powers, e.t.c. Update as soon as you can.

i hope you keep writing your story is really good!:)

please continue. i liked it, even though it was only one chapter. i like stories like this and i really want you to continue. so update soon so i can learn more about this story!

uber interesting. you must continue. ;)

yes yes continue!

ah! too many hottalicious guys! update asap! :P ~Sage

You have to continue. Absolutely. This is a really interesting story. What's the main character's name, by the way?

you should definately continue!

i really like where this is going! (give the girl more powers! i really want her to have more powers! i dunno why just do!)

anyways whats her name? and what does she look like? but i guess those will be answered in the next chappie right?? because you HAVE to continue!

its fabulous!

hehewent SLIGHTLY hyper

okwell update soon! (because you have to!)

cya

mia

Of course you should continue it, it sounds good and its a fairly intriguing beginning, update soon!

OMG! it's like 6 am and i'm rediculously awake. can't spell tho. but yes. u REALLY REALLY REALLY sheould continue this. its a totally new idea and Lanc is HOTT! jeez. i'm such a sucker for a cute face *sighs* yes. continue. please. for me? *puppy face* lol.

~birdytamel~