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| Ohmm 2005-04-05 ch 1,  | abuseWonderful choice of words and imagery comes together to form a truly fantastical journey you bring the reader on! |
| Cyssel 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abusei like the fantasical imagery used especially. truly, you are one of the best poets i've come across here. |
| Manuel Fajar 2005-04-02 ch 1, | abuseupon those dreams that woven tapestries, reveal old tales of loves and woes begone, of those,—those images so dear to life, green elves,—spry and sly device to treasure, for that day realization wakes bright, with understanding that was written bold, in a rune no mortal can decipher, for eternity requires its self known, to divulge secrets hidden deep in heart, as Fate does as She weaves her magic strands, running shuttle back-&-forth across loom, so many hues,—of copper, silver, gold, enthralling all our deep desires unbid, 'til avid of love's balm we come to rest, banners ripped by airs forgotten ages. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abuseLovely imagery. |
| Aslan Israel 2005-03-24 ch 1, | abusePerfectly written. Brava! |
| philoslove 2005-03-24 ch 1, | abusebeautiful imagery! I like the relation between the moon's steerman and the sun-chariot maid, very refreshingly unique. ineffable realm?where ships of star bits sail forthand Dawn and Dusk meet |
| eighteen hundred 2005-03-23 ch 1, | abusePretty. I like the way all the words fit together^^ |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI love it. it flows so well, every stanza is a gift, a neat little package to open and placate. excellent job. |