Your writing is great, let me start off by saying that. It's an addiction as anyone else and since you've chosen to tell his story, not hers, you do get an insight in his mind, even though I think that a continuation of this story would be good. It's mentioned, just briefly, that his guilt gets worse everytime, and I think that his guilt isn't given enough space, it becomes a bit anonymous because of that. We're not given a complete insight in his problem, the depth of it and the troubles he must go through, not to mention how his wife must feel. At times you go deep in this story and at times you do not. But overall I think that the writing and topic itself was very interesting and very good. I must also say that I think the title was brilliant, it hooked me enough to read and your writing hooked me enough to review. Very good.

Ah, this touches on a couple good interlinked subjects. History building who you are, long after you've forgotten the founding causes, and the impossible yet ingrained concept of a "normal" person as a standard of living.

It's late and I've too much to write in a short review, but this article begs to segway into a dissertation regarding the social obfuscation of good and evil. Good work.

Interesting view into an addiction as painful as any other. I like this view into the condition - honest, and it discusses the problem frankly. I like it.

Haha I never sincerely thought about people this way until I read this =D I like it though. It is more 'tell' than 'show' but... I still liked it :D

Man... You are a **, you Vampire! Of course, I don't blame him on keeping it a secret. I don't think I want to see his wife mad. Though, I think Freek II getting mad can be more irritating than that.