You are a weird individual. lol

That was cool though.

I imagine this to a really spunky-type tune. It's very songlike and as usual, you've done a wonderful job! It is always a treat to read your work. ;)

Ah, I understand even better now! Brilliant, such a unique topic. *smiles again*

Fun stuff, I love the sarcastic and witty tone. Swiss cheese... *smiles*

I like cheese. works well with this poem.

one word and one word only: awesome. -ADD

cheese...m..yum...oh ya...good poem btw. "

DW

YAY

keep writing!

nice. i like "especially under pressure and heat"

by the way, "letzte stunde" translates simply as 'last hour'. the two lines near the bottom translate to 'you are always so, as this last hour' it gets preatty repetitive. it's not one of my favortie pieces, and i think i liked it much better in german, but so it goes. thanks for the review though.

Since you asked for a review, it's a bid odd, I'm guessing a background story will make it all clear.

Excellent and once again your poem is relating to my life...excellent job and i love how you put your feelings of decisions in your poem...great work. :)

Angel4soul

lol Very funny. I quite got a kick out of the "... Swiss Cheese" line. Keep up the good work (and thanks for reviewing by the way)! Write on!

Chandra

Good call on that one! Oh, sweet irony! This piece is genius, I love it! It reminds me of some pieces I've written. Feel free to check them out.

wow! that IS a suprise ending. XD swiss cheese! m, yummy.i seriously thought it would be sad or angsty, like about two rotting corpses or something. O_o ; awesome poem. i like these lines:"After a heated argument, you leave me cold

Stored away, you attempt to disguise

What’s happened; you see discontent in my eyes"-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-

Wow. This was great. You have such an interesting style of writing. Nice job with the rhythm on this. Karma Chameleon