|Reviews for From Emmentaler to Shermani|
| King Krod von Bopper 9/4/05 . chapter 1
You are a weird individual. lol
That was cool though.
| Calliope Foster 7/9/05 . chapter 1
I imagine this to a really spunky-type tune. It's very songlike and as usual, you've done a wonderful job! It is always a treat to read your work. ;)
| Nobody-n-Particular 6/18/05 . chapter 2
Ah, I understand even better now! Brilliant, such a unique topic. *smiles again*
| Nobody-n-Particular 6/18/05 . chapter 1
Fun stuff, I love the sarcastic and witty tone. Swiss cheese... *smiles*
| Free-Writer 5/25/05 . chapter 1
I like cheese. works well with this poem.
| arcane devices 5/14/05 . chapter 1
one word and one word only: awesome. -ADD
| In Search of Sunrise 5/14/05 . chapter 2
cheese...m..yum...oh ya...good poem btw. "
| mizu no kokoro 5/13/05 . chapter 2
| crazy dog events 4/19/05 . chapter 1
nice. i like "especially under pressure and heat"
by the way, "letzte stunde" translates simply as 'last hour'. the two lines near the bottom translate to 'you are always so, as this last hour' it gets preatty repetitive. it's not one of my favortie pieces, and i think i liked it much better in german, but so it goes. thanks for the review though.
| JuxA Person 4/3/05 . chapter 1
Since you asked for a review, it's a bid odd, I'm guessing a background story will make it all clear.
| angel4soul 3/30/05 . chapter 1
Excellent and once again your poem is relating to my life...excellent job and i love how you put your feelings of decisions in your poem...great work. :)
| Precious Death's Whisper 3/26/05 . chapter 1
lol Very funny. I quite got a kick out of the "... Swiss Cheese" line. Keep up the good work (and thanks for reviewing by the way)! Write on!
| Lost Soldier REVAMPED 3/26/05 . chapter 1
Good call on that one! Oh, sweet irony! This piece is genius, I love it! It reminds me of some pieces I've written. Feel free to check them out.
| KwazyKandyPie 3/24/05 . chapter 1
wow! that IS a suprise ending. XD swiss cheese! m, yummy.i seriously thought it would be sad or angsty, like about two rotting corpses or something. O_o ; awesome poem. i like these lines:"After a heated argument, you leave me cold
Stored away, you attempt to disguise
What’s happened; you see discontent in my eyes"-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
| Karma Chameleon 3/24/05 . chapter 1
Wow. This was great. You have such an interesting style of writing. Nice job with the rhythm on this. Karma Chameleon