I love the lines of this poem. This has been wonderfully done!

This is an amazing poem, it has an awesome rythme to it. It is a very peaceful poem...well as peaceful as a poem can be, but you get my point. I really like this peice, i will be expecting more

Autumn Dawn, Autumn Light, found within the essence of the Eternal Paradise of what we call Music... Indeed this is a very nice poem.

Nicely done! the rhyme came in smoothly and unobstrusively. i liked "Eating the chains of visions gory" and "the moon will remain in sift and sway"...the content of ur piece was way too over-my-head though, but i enjoyed it nonetheless =D

it's almost a pink ployd sort of thing... eating chains of visions gory. i'm usualy not into morbid, but it made me chuckle (dont take that badly) , so kudos.

thanks for the extremely flattering review.