Very beautiful story, i couldn't stop reading it. I admire your writing style so much, very thoguhtful and shows the clear thinknig process. Full kudos from me!

This story was pretty neat I think. :) I really liked the main character, and lockjaws are just cool in general. Although there wasn't a whole lot of action, you really were able to give personality to the two critters in the story, and that made the "fanfic" pretty sweet. I hope to see more from you, and yay for lockjaws! :D

aw martok!! i'd never read the end part of this - never would've thought skadden would take him back and then leave him! *intrigue intrigue intrigue* o.0 *dances*

AH. *squiggles madly*

great chapter. love what you've done so far.

o_0*wants to explode*

*wriggles MADly* Oh no they got him! He must get free again! :0

Poor Martook, he certainly does go through a lot. I really liked when he got all snarly, but man I got a dreadful feeling when the guy went to hit him with the bar. Got crawlies all over when I read the end! o_0

E! I want to know why the left, and what that predatory things was out there! And Martook - I loves that little floof. He reads so different, so wonderful and I love his almost-constant optimism. XD

Just to say, I am still reading this story. The character interactions grabs me here a lot. So yeah, still reading this because I like it. Hope you continue soon. ^-^

O.o I'm already liking this story more and more. I really want to see what happens next please. :)

*wriggles* Ah I love reading the little tidbits that you add in, that I hadn't read before. I love this story - you do such a better job then me in writing about the Locks. X}

WOO! That is interesting, can't wait to read more and see what your new story is all about! Till next chapter...

This grabbed my interest. I would like to see more! :)