Wow, this is an amazing chapter. Original too. I love how much detail you were able to give with so little words. Great chappie.

Wow, awesome story. Your descriptions and originality are beautiful and crisp. I really love this story.

It would be interesting to hear a person's thoughts besides the main characters. You know, like the average people living there, just to see how they react in their world full of hardships.

Awesome and amazing story. Please update soon.