hmm...I think this would make a really good angsty rock song. But that's just me. _ I really enjoy your work Raishel, it's so heartfelt and true and honest. Very nice! Hope your grandmother gets better or at least doesn't suffer too Rose

I hope you're grandma gets better.

WOW! Oh when I read something like this I have an annoying habit of sticking my nose where it doesn't belong and trying to give advice, but for this one I have nothing. Just that my relationship with my grandpa is a lot like this. Well one of these days he's gonna overdo the whiskey and get stuck in the same situation. *Hug* I hope it all works out for you.

I loved it! It's great, I really understand what you're saying, even though I've never felt that way. Great job!

Amazing. Your poem sounds exactly like what I just went through with my grandmother (may she rest in piece). Write on.