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| ShadowPharoh 2005-09-15 ch 1, | abusea very enjoyable peice. awesome. SP |
| jenifer ayrs to eri 2005-03-25 ch 1, anon. | abusehey, i know nuthin bout writing songs, i only write them when i find myself siging a poem! lol, ty eri |
| eri 2005-03-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseyea i thought it was rly good. i just didn'tlike th bridge format. i'm a music geek, and i was toght that bridges was a break in the music and it folowed the 2nd chors latley, and its the only verse section that is like that. i duno. its a really good poem, i would jsut think the little bridge parts would be an extended verse, or a chors. prolly a verse. wow i prolly bored u to death w/ that. but its still a rly good poem/song type thing.Eri |
| Cerii-chan 2005-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI love it! Great work! Keep it up! --Cerii-chan! |