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| SweetWithUncertainty 2006-04-23 ch 1,   | as that other poet said, this poem is indeed amazing... Simply scared,SG |
| abridgedone 2005-09-03 ch 1, | I love your imagery. I'm not one to give compliments unless I mean it, so don't think I'm just being nice. Your words harbor a sense of mystery with a shadowy beauty that can make the heart cringe and the mind whirl. I think that you aren't finished with this yet. I've taken poetry from months [even years] back and added more to them and revised them until they were satisfactory. You said you thought that something was missing, and I can sense it too. It seems to me like you just need a little more. But as is, the poem is very beautiful. It's a masterpiece in its present state, but I think you could make it even more mind blowing with a few additional lines! I also wanted to thank you for reviewing on my story, Peppermint. I never expected something so positive! I've been to scared to post until today and I actually got a good review! I wanted to return the favor, so I came to your list of works and decided to choose the one with the least reviews. I am very glad I did, for this poem is indeed amazing! |
| Wingsister 2005-04-03 ch 1, | Very good! I like it.. |