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s m e l l . o f . r a i n 2005-04-11 ch 1,	abuseInteresting, interesting. I like the last two lines- "Flow away,/Flow away." The repitition is good there. =) Nice imagery, too. Good job!
The Lonely Vampire 2005-03-24 ch 1,	abuseYes, it is beautiful... Do you think you could write something similar for water? You have great skills. It's rather poetic... are they creatures? Or people, whose element is air?
Rocky G 2005-03-24 ch 1,	abuseVery wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it. Rocky :)
Cerii-chan 2005-03-24 ch 1,	abuseI loved it! Its beautiful! So beautiful, in fact, that it's going on my favorites list. Great writing. Keep it up! --Cerii-chan!