This makes lots of sense, and it follows the story really well. Good story!

I think this is a great point of view of the story. However it is not totally consistent in the way of whether the soldier believes or not (4th paragraph: "In my opinion, Christ was a fool, for though he is surely not the ‘Son of God,’ he could have at least defended himself against Pilate’s interrogations") Possibly a change of tense: "It had been my opinion..."? Just a suggestion. Also 1st paragraph: "relieved" should probably be changed to "believed" lol. Otherwise, great story!

It was remarkable.

wow...ok, ud better get an A on tht paper or ill come and KILL ur teacher. tht was great! really!

it's ok...sticks a lot to the bible! so that's good!