This is a really good story. I like how you leave us thinking with each chapter! Could you update? I know how it is to start a story and then just leave it, but this one is really intriguing.

this is so good! update update! i'm totally adding this to my alerts!

write more soon, and check out my story!

Oh, very dramatic ending.

Been a while since I've looked in this site. Glad to read your works. It's intriguing me quite a lot and I can't deny the fact that I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter. Oh, I like your style of writing too; it's blended with simplicity.

Well this is interesting. Those quotes you have at the bottom of your thing with your AN reminds me of things I read off the back of a book I read a while back. False Memory by Dean Koontz, you should read it sometime. Anyways the plot of the story is very good, so please update it soon.

That was amazing! It was perfect. I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Hey i like your style of writing! update soon! :)

wow colleen wow, just amazing.It's sounds really interesting so far :D I LOVE IT AND I DID READ IT HOE BAG.

I reccomend this story cause from what you told me it sounds REALLY good

Great story, but try not to jump so much. Like the part where the person said "That's not what I meant," doesn't really make sense. He only told the detective some info, but nothing to indicate Randi knows who the attacker was.

nice...more soon!

well, you've gotten my attention, but I would have wished that you didn't end on a cliffhanger of sorts.

;_; Aw, such a short chapter! lol xD I want more! I'm interested. =P Can't wait for an update!