|Reviews for Revelation|
| Not An Account 5/25/09 . chapter 1
intruiging (i can't spell tonight)
| isaly 12/7/05 . chapter 1
I'm sorry, but this doesn't follow the set guidelines of haiku. Also, you misspelled "revealing."
| CJ Jazzy 5/10/05 . chapter 1
That is very true, we all tend to read between the lines right? I wanted to email a thank you but found no email. I like to learn from other writers and dreamers its how we learn right? Im babbling on I know, but I wanted to say thank you. And you dont have to answer these questions, but how long have you been writing, and have you gotten just a review bashing a piece you wrote? Thank you for your review, and in a lot of ways this poem said a lot of what im going through however minuscule it is. Good Job!
| His Only 4/27/05 . chapter 1
Hm... very thought provoking. I am connecting it to your summary (which was like a poem in itself) and I can see what you mean. So little words, speak so much truth. Wow. You did excellent! Your work is always enjoyable to read. Keep it up and God Bless!
| Sakura Himitsu 4/18/05 . chapter 1
Nice. Fascinating. It gets you thinking, doesn't it? Keep it up! ]
| cosmo-queen 4/18/05 . chapter 1
I love this, the thought of unspoken "words" revealing more than their spoken counterparts is fascinating. Great work :)
| zral 4/17/05 . chapter 1
Cool! So mysterious and catchy and full of meaning! All expressed in a few words.. Good work! )
| Emilytabone 4/14/05 . chapter 1
Nice. I like that
| ShadowPharoh 4/13/05 . chapter 1
wow. i loved how it was so short. very intriguing. FANTASTIC!
| SayIt'sWrong 4/1/05 . chapter 1
Like this really deep, well done. So much mystery involved. I like it! QueenVixta
| Neaera 4/1/05 . chapter 1
you got me thinking with just two lines! wow... that's awesome, especially since it hurts my head to think...lol... keep it up! ;-)
| Soviet 3/27/05 . chapter 1
O... I like it.
| Fabian Cortez 3/27/05 . chapter 1
This is a perfect and very well observed piece.
| beautifullydisturbed 3/26/05 . chapter 1
You paint such a big picture in what little words you use. Allowing the message to be versatile according to the thoughts and experiences of others. I like your writing style a lot. The talent you display is infinate and put to outstanding use. I look up to you and tip my hat.
| Kasatriya 3/25/05 . chapter 1
This is such a good poem! I LOVE IT!